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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2003-09-01 10:29 PM


As the crispness of fall settles in the air
I feel your presence with me every-where
Your eyes as blue as the sky, light up my day
As you brush your chesnut hair gently away

The birds sing outside our window, as we wake up side by side
The love inside my heart overflowing, my feelings I don't hide
Laying there beside me, I softly touch your skin
As the feelings deep inside me, come flooding from within

I'm more in love with you today than I was the day before
Wondering what lies ahead, my mind races to what lies in store
As each new day of the season, comes with the beginning of dawn
I am reminded of your love, playing in my ear the most beautiful song

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 610

1 posted 2003-09-01 11:32 PM


Amy,

I loved it.  great write.

~Laura~

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-09-01 11:35 PM


AMy, I loved this I could hear the music , feel the beat < and feel your in this.Nicely done.
Crystal

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