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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-09-01 08:28 PM


that's it, i'm done
who cares, i'm through

i don't care anymore
i've hardened my heart
i'll cry not one more tear

i'm tired of searching
in all the wrong places
for wishing and praying
for a stupid ol' dream

i started from the beginning
believed the best in you
gave all i had to give
put myself aside too often
thought you were what i wanted

now i realize i'm the fool
this could never really work
you're a selfish person
i give all i have

so i give in and now you win
i hope you're happy as a lark
you got just what you wanted

so good-bye hopes and dreams
and all that goes with that crap

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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1 posted 2003-09-01 09:11 PM


ouch
Hope next week will bring some sunshine and hope for you, Kristie. Meanwhile, keep reading and writing, and looking forward to new adventures.

Alnilam
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2 posted 2003-09-01 09:11 PM


i really liked this. the free style really just helped make it so much more personal and poignant. i especially like the way you augmented then diminished the number of lines each stanza. it was really a wonderful read. makes me want to hug ya so

~*Alnilam*~
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3 posted 2003-09-02 12:16 PM


Midnightsun-yeah this week kinda sucked.  I hope you're right about next week! :-)

A~you're  a sweetie, thanks

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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4 posted 2003-09-02 12:22 PM


You know this week you feel all the pain and let downs, but next week you feel the healing and the new beginning.The next week is full of life, happiness, true heart, and spirited soul that I know is within you.May you shine and let not any man dim the light of you my friend
Crystal

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