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Dear_______,
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan 
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My Dear_________, This heart of mine is aching, longs to tell you what it really feels inside. Yet it shall never speak these feelings which I keep hidden. When at last this heart of mine finally lays dying it'll cry in silence within itself knowing the unspoken words will never be heard. Love, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Froggy The unspoken love letter is sad. Makes me wish for a declaration instead. You never know where the next step leads, unless you take it.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
froggy - tell ________ please . . . this aches . . . xxoo |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Froggy..:-) This is a new one, I like the way it flows... A sad poem, but perhaps it is best left usaid, who the blank____ in this poem is. >>>>ice<<<< |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you each for your nice comments. The blank in the poem is for whomever you wish it to be. :-) Ribbit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so sad... reminds me of all the times things go unspoken... to remain forever regretted when the chance has passed by. That's why I tell. *S* |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is sad and full of such longing.Life's to short not to speak what's in our hearts.A very emotive write.  Crystal |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you Suthern and Angelblueyes. Yes life is to short to leave things unsaid. |
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