whenever (thoughts inspired by a Rebel)

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Open Poetry #28

whenever (thoughts inspired by a Rebel)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-09-01 01:11 PM

whenever we danced
I could feel the want of you
wanting me to need you

and I was not there
when you needed
what I wanted

then neither of us was there
at the very moment
we both wanted and needed
what only the other could offer

a sad irony of love
imitating life

inspired by Local Rebel's poem: /pip/Forum81/HTML/001986.html

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-01-2003 01:26 PM).]

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-09-01 01:58 PM

This is the story of my life...

I enjoyed this.

Susan

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-09-01 02:05 PM

Susan, I'm sorry to hear that, but thanks for reading and commenting!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-01 02:48 PM

Beautiful Kacy - the write I mean
perfectly matched mannn you guys should have dueted this . . .
this, too does not sound fair
xxoo

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

4 posted 2003-09-01 03:22 PM

yes Kacey -- timing is everything...

I'm honored to have inspired

thank you for reciprocating

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-09-01 05:04 PM

Not a bad idea, Sue, to duet with a pro.

Reb, your words always inspire. Thanks for the piggy back ride.

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