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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-31 11:01 PM

The final few
peeks and glimpses,
inevitably to shut
like a folded accordian,
though one long note will still sing
along with next season's chorus.

As i wait on the threshold
as the guard changes
bringing summer,
each time
pinning pink ribbons and somewhat wanning dreams
on the youngest of seasons.

And when the sunflowers smile
at August's end,
I stand amazed and confused
at the exitway,
never knowing it was already gone.

And the butterflies
will elope with the
exodus of loosening leaves,
airborn, in a shared sky,
setting sail on the same winds.

And here i am again, sillygirl,
in the middle of a field about to metamorphasize,
following the wind to see from where it all begins,
but it is already coming towards me again,
bringing its next trip around.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-01-2003 08:29 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-08-31 11:06 PM

Michele - you're writings are like a new found day, exciting and amazing. You're one heck of a writer that's blossoming...

BC

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-08-31 11:08 PM

what wonderful thoughts expressed and such a delight to read,,,

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-09-01 12:53 PM

Sometimes,
you write things I wish I'd written..

This is one of those times..

I'm in awe..

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

4 posted 2003-09-01 07:50 PM

Love your way with words. You are truly talented.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-09-01 08:08 PM

you..you..I love you. speak..I no..can

insanity is not a crime

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-09-02 12:42 PM

OMG Michele . . .
I just did this

And when the sunflowers smile
at August's end,
I stand amazed and confused
at the exitway,
never knowing it was already gone.

Goddd I know . . .
beautiful writing, as always
xxoo

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-09-02 12:51 PM

Michele~
This is beautiful writing~

'And the butterflies
will elope with the
exodus of loosening leaves,
airborn, in a shared sky,
setting sail on the same winds.

And here i am again, sillygirl,
in the middle of a field about to metamorphasize,
following the wind to see from where it all begins,
but it is already coming towards me again,
bringing its next trip around.'

I like this SO much~
Lovely - lovely - lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2003-09-02 11:59 PM

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Get the picture?

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-03-2003 12:00 AM).]

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

9 posted 2003-09-03 09:47 AM

A lovely line,
and one of your best.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-09-03 09:52 AM

"And the butterflies
will elope with the
exodus of loosening leaves,
airborn, in a shared sky,
setting sail on the same winds."

~ sheeer p-o-e-t-r-y...

EA

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

11 posted 2003-09-04 09:59 AM

Michele
This stood out to me
excellent write

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