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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-08-31 08:19 PM


you know
it's not
the end of the world
if they never
call you
back
it's not
the end of the world
if they
don't love you in return
i'm sorry
it's just
a sad sight
to see someone
literally fall to pieces
on the brink
of self sacrifice
because
they've allowed
their sanity
to
lie in
a shallow grave
i'm sorry
i'm not
a bitter person
nor heartless
it's just
i'm put to shame
everyday
wanting
to spit
in people's faces
to
GET OVER IT


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-31-2003 08:21 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-08-31 08:31 PM


geezzzzzzzzz, I'm trying, I'm trying

Thanks I needed that!!
M

gemjop
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2 posted 2003-08-31 08:42 PM


will you hit me if i say I caaaaaaaant.

no, i'm trying, i'm getting there. lol.

other guilty people step forward, i'd say raph is next!

keep snapping us out of our woe is me summer kris, this is just what we needed.

more!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Alnilam
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3 posted 2003-08-31 09:07 PM


as much as i could hate you for telling me that, i want to hug you more than anything for making me wipe my tears he caused. thanks

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-31 09:45 PM


Well, if the timing of your poem doesn't beat all! lol I usually write such upbeat poems with positive spins on them, and this evening I posted a lonely hearts poem! I suppose this is a sign that I should go back to my usual style of writing poetry!


EA

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-09-01 10:47 AM


nice vent, Kris . . .
much needed and I know what ya mean

xxoo

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-09-01 11:12 AM


There's a process called *grieving.* When a person dies there's something called closure. When relationships die there's a process. I definately agree with the fact of leaving it, and going on after a while, but that should apply to BOTH ppl. Leaving has to be done by both people because if one keeps coming around, and opening the wound how does the other one move, and GET OVER IT if they aren't [allowed] to forget?

Thanks,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-09-01 11:20 AM


Ceinwyn - I like your thoughts in this...

BC

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-09-01 05:02 PM


Kris, LOL at this poem. I've been trying to write other stuff because I feel like people get so tired of reading all my happy....mushey....romantic.....gooey as honey......sweet..."I love Gary with all my heart" kind of love poetry. I wonder how many other people feel this same way as you wrote about? I wish that I knew. I would never worry about writing anything except the love poems that I love to write. Sometimes I put "they", or "he" and "she" because of me thinking people get tired of hearing about mine and Gary's love.

Thanks for letting  me know  that there are those of you who had rather read love poems and happy upbeat poems.
Hugs  
Ethel

Kethry
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9 posted 2003-09-01 05:29 PM


What a kickass poem, definitely a shaker.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2003-09-01 08:28 PM


lol..loved the poem and used to feel the same way...until it happened to me.

Shararose~oh how true.

Ethel~Sweet, sweet woman...sometimes it hurts to read about your love...but I always, always am happy you have it!

Okay, I am done responding like its my thread...forgive me.

Susan

Ceinwyn
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11 posted 2003-09-01 08:42 PM


thanks for reading and not taking offense..it was a vent you know I get hurt to you know..& you know i'm just saying when i mention "woe is me" is the ppl who are highly dramatic & just seeking attention over something that's all...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-09-01 08:45 PM


Thank you, Susan. I know that you are happy for me about my love. I can feel that you are. I can also feel some who aren't so happy about it. LOL

angelblueyes
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13 posted 2003-09-02 12:39 PM


I hear you in this and feel that we are each entitled to our thoughts and feelings. I write alot of times of my sadness, but it is to help me understand and share a part of my life with otheres.If we all percieve to be strong and happy all the time we are only fooling ourselves.On the same perspective though I see your side and see those that take this to an extremity.Not sure where I lie, but I am who I am and you my friend are a turthful person that sets it straight.Keep it up
Crystal

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14 posted 2003-09-02 10:18 AM


ROFL... But I wail so well! LOL Or is that so much? *G*
KristieSue
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15 posted 2003-09-02 12:03 PM


everyone needs a kick in the butt at times, I suppose....good job :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Ceinwyn
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16 posted 2003-09-03 05:57 PM


honestly think you all took it the wrong way...it was a vent..it wasn't aimed to anyone in particular...my definition of woe is me = Drama Queen blowing everything way out of porportion....no offense really..if taken then..well *shrugs*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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