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kaleanna
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0 posted 2003-08-31 02:31 PM


Hard to lie, please
Open your heart to me
Needing no lies or blame, it's so
Easy to tell the truth, cant you
See what this heart needs, is a
Trustworthy,open and honest person to hold her and
Yes, one that will capture her heart and soul

Meesh

[This message has been edited by kaleanna (08-31-2003 07:26 PM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-03 03:31 AM


terrifically penned and well expressed,,,

         


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-09-03 03:43 AM


Yes, honesty and truth are certainly necessary.
A very good write.  
Hugs  
Ethel

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-09-03 05:04 AM


Thia is really pretty. I just can't
seem
to do these right. But, you certainly did.  
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Ethel

El_Campeador
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4 posted 2003-09-03 07:31 AM


I enjoy acrostic poems, and this one is really good!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-09-03 07:54 AM


expressions of love and care I believe we all wish for, and never let go of trust and belief...no matter what!
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