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Cerenity'sLine
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since 2003-08-26
Posts 21


0 posted 2003-08-31 12:15 PM



For those of you who are wondering yes it's me Cerenity, I just bought a new computer and have not yet transfered my cookie so had to pick up a new name for the mean time, also have not written in a while and found this in my unfinished file so not so sure how this one turned out! really rusty.
Your Dreams Finding Solidarity


Nature’s breath thrashes about
stirring up the senses,
opening one’s mind to dreaming,
thoughts do ascend sight unseen
hopefully towards fruitful gain.

Knowing some shall fall as acorns
rendering it’s self to decay
among thriving thistles,
those finding a stronghold live on
as cherished gift’s in hearts center.

No matter how the dream s occur
weather twinkling of the pupil
or in necessity’s furry,
the render must possess adequate
desire to make it thrive well.

To ask something, desire its birth
have wisdom to see beyond the
shroud of prevailing winds
keeping clear minded of its masked
arrival, for most come disguised!

For your dreams to find sure-footing
solidarity upon the rock mass of reality,
you must turn them to heart felt emotions
with fulfillment as the end result.

Not taking the chance on your dreams
just tossing them to the wind, not
giving them direction is to stand
stagnate in your own mire
giving no solidarity!

Next time you’re among the beauty and
tranquility of nature and your dreams
begins to surface go ahead cast them out
they shall return fruitfully.
By Cerenity

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-08-31 12:38 PM


Ah, Cerenity, this is completely beautiful!! There doesn't seem to be any trace of 'unfinished' here at all!!  Much enjoyed, and good to see you...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-08-31 01:27 PM


Knowing some shall fall as acorns
rendering it’s self to decay
among thriving thistles,
those finding a stronghold live on
as cherished gift’s in hearts center.


my favorite lines...welcome back

great to read you
hugs
M

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-08-31 01:53 PM


HelloDearestLady~
I have missed you BIG !!!
I saw your reply the other day and was HOPING it was you~

This is beautiful ... just beautiful~
It's SO good to read you again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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