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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-08-31 04:14 AM

Sense

Motivated and challenged
Determined with a concentrated force
Not quite adernaline
And just as strong

Barricade and downward stare
Circumstances so unfair

Waste

Fall and anger rise
Inside and contained
Repitious thoughts
Evoking and,
Driving me insane

Stare into the flame,
That common sense of shame

Trick

Labeled for pretend
Puke and sore
Hard job control
Faded eyes gently dissapear

Unfair struggle constant steady and repeat
Bruise of challenge, the jobs not complete.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-08-31 09:29 AM

glad I read it before eating a morning snack

the imagery wasn't too appetizing

little typo fixes:
adrenaline
repetitious

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-08-31 10:53 AM

Haven't seen you for a while Itchy. And how will the job be done is what comes to mind for me? This is intense. Wow.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2003-08-31 03:21 PM

Midnitesun-Thanx for the spelling correction. I miss every now and then.

And thank you Shara its been a while since Ive had the time. I just started college and Ive been doing homework and adjusting to my new schedule.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-08-31 05:38 PM

Fall and anger rise
Inside and contained
Repitious thoughts
Evoking and,
Driving me insane

yes they do tend to do that madness rules tho at times,doesnt it?

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-08-31 06:28 PM

That's good Itchy! Good for you. Education is the ticket to good things in life, that's for sure. Hope all gets back to normal, and you get settled in soon.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-31-2003 06:29 PM).]

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2003-08-31 07:11 PM

inkedgoddess-Madness, definitely haunting at times. I just wish it would leave.

THanx Shara

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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