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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-31 12:30 PM


My Precious

Those lips
are luscious.
Let me taste
them again
my precious.

I can see
the desire
in your
eyes.

Come closer.
Tempt me,
taste me,
tease not,
nor tantilize.


JamesLee
August27
2003

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-08-31 12:34 PM


terrific write n read,,,

         


vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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2 posted 2003-08-31 12:48 PM



I'm liking this one, James...nicely done.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
3 posted 2003-08-31 01:44 AM


Eep.  I just watched Two Towers again last night ... want to guess what I was thinking when I read your title?  

As such I was unprepared; or ill prepared as the case may be.  This caught me off guard, and it was ... pleasant.

~L

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2003-08-31 02:20 AM


Mmmmm....this is smooth as satin, and velvety soft!!!!  Wonderful way to start my day...excellent...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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5 posted 2003-08-31 02:26 AM




*smooch*

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