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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-08-30 06:02 PM




In her heart,
there's more....
tangled
undisplayed
beyond that
shown
on her sleeve
forget what you see
or think, you know
don't be a fool
no one really knows
what grows wild
in the heart
of a woman.....


~SEA~

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-08-30 06:04 PM


*s...love the picture and your words, SEA
Good to see you.
hugss
M

SEA
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2 posted 2003-08-30 06:07 PM


thank you Maureen, and hugs right back
NewAgePaladin
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3 posted 2003-08-30 06:10 PM


A wonderful poem indeed. Looking into the hearts of women is hard *laughs*.
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4 posted 2003-08-30 08:51 PM


stunning, Sue.

and yep, I do relate. smile.


Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-08-30 08:54 PM


"what grows wild
in the heart of
a woman"

WOW!


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6 posted 2003-08-30 08:57 PM


AMEN!

We are a mysterious species aren't we?

Loved this one Sea!

Tima

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7 posted 2003-08-30 08:57 PM



Yes...exactly!

Well said, Susan...

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Kethry
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8 posted 2003-08-30 09:03 PM


love the image of untamed wildness.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Ivy Rose
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9 posted 2003-08-31 01:01 AM


SEA...I love your last three lines in particular:

what grows wild
in the heart
of a woman.....

No one knows what grows wild in the heart of another. ***Ivy Rose

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-08-31 01:03 AM


Thank you. It's nice to be understood!


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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11 posted 2003-08-31 01:04 AM


damn sue...just damn!!! helen
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12 posted 2003-08-31 01:51 AM


Perfect title.  Honestly.  You could have written twelve lines of "blah blah blah" under it and I'd not regret the click.  And where are you getting these lovely photos?

*stretches and smiles*

What a welcome ... it is good to be back.

~L

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13 posted 2003-08-31 01:54 AM


forget what you see
or think, you know
don't be a fool
no one really knows
what grows wild
in the heart
of a woman.....


So, so true, Susan.  
I love this.
Hugs  
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-08-31 04:07 AM


Oh Sue, its been too long between reading you. Beautiful, my girl, simply beautiful.


Dee

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Sunnyone
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15 posted 2003-08-31 04:07 AM


Ah, yes, there is a wild spirit in the heart of every woman...and mine enjoyed this writing very much!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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16 posted 2003-08-31 09:33 AM


well done
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17 posted 2003-08-31 09:37 AM



there you go, getting to the core again

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18 posted 2003-09-01 09:12 AM


Hi Sea,

WoW, I have been falling in to some great poetry this morning, perfect lines and so very nice to be reading your lovely work as always.

Love Cerenity

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19 posted 2003-09-01 09:15 AM


Beautiful and mysterious...wonderful words!
Eric

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20 posted 2003-09-01 09:16 AM


"no one really knows
what grows wild
in the heart
of a woman....."

~ But men love trying to find out what does!


EA

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21 posted 2003-09-01 10:21 AM


SEA~

Yes yes yes yes yes ~
Oh girlie ... you are beautiful~
Thank you for this piece ... it is sooooo real~
So you .... so me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com   

Susan Caldwell
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22 posted 2003-09-01 11:34 AM


Loved it!!  Some should be very afraid of what grows wild in the heart of a woman...

Susan

littlewing
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23 posted 2003-09-02 01:02 PM


Susan:

I am adopting this:

no one really knows
what grows wild
in the heart
of a woman.....

making a plaque and hanging it on my wall
amazing writing missy
xxoo

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