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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-30 05:06 PM



Listen


I don’t mind
so much
that my shoes
are smudged
just stop
stepping on
my heart

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-08-30 05:17 PM


I hear ya

straight to the point

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-08-30 05:41 PM


darn..that's a good one *s
M

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
3 posted 2003-08-30 05:44 PM


Helen:

mine has tire treads on it . . .
*hugs*
beautiful writing, as always
xxoo

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2003-08-30 05:47 PM


don't I know it....sure can relate to this one
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