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jade dragoness
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0 posted 2003-08-30 02:53 PM



some days we fly in unison

and on other days

some of us journey forth

on wounded wing


so far today,

my flight is

on mended wings


and I am enjoying the view

I see here in the blue


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1 posted 2003-08-30 03:44 PM


this made me smile
sometimes, we don't fly at all
sometimes, we sit in the tree tops, and dream of the wind
that glides us, into the blue

Ericc
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2 posted 2003-08-30 04:42 PM


Thanks for the flight...beautiful!
Eric

NewAgePaladin
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3 posted 2003-08-30 05:19 PM


Some create poems...
   ... others create worlds.

You my friend control a universe of your own. A spectacular poem indeed.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-08-31 01:03 AM


jade . . . this is beautiful
Welcome to PIP!
I missed your entrance

so far today,

my flight is

on mended wings

*smile* nice writing
xxoo

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