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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-08-30 01:51 PM





I felt the air change
heavy with the sent of peace
a deeper breath of calm
that soothes the soul
the waves call to me
my heart answers, in echo
each step, closer to nirvana
submerging my senses
I let it all go
here,
I am free
here,
I touch heaven
and forget the things
that haunt
and know the truth
of happiness
and contentment
the gulls, don’t cry
but sing of healing
and rebirth
this, my mecca
grounding and balancing
me once again
and my spirit shines
Pacific blue.......


~SEA~

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2003-08-30 02:01 PM


~SEA~ It's so good to read you!

Love the calm breeze and peaceful feelings,
and of course your title is perfection.  

Hope all is well with you.

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-08-30 02:02 PM


SEA,

I love this place...With two children wailing and bickering this afternoon, I need to join you!

Just wonderful!

Patricia

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3 posted 2003-08-30 03:21 PM


SEA
A lovely read, enjoyed.

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4 posted 2003-08-30 03:26 PM


One day I'm going to lie down in the tide, and let the waves wash over me, and line my breathing up with the waves.... This is beautiful, and I love it.

Kielo

I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness.

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5 posted 2003-08-30 03:26 PM


what a beautiful read

love the scent of this write

vlraynes
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6 posted 2003-08-30 03:26 PM



Susan...

I always know, when I click on your poetry, that
I will find a peaceful beauty within your words.

This is no exception...Thank you...

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-08-30 04:22 PM


..."the gulls, don’t cry
but sing of healing
and rebirth
this, my mecca
grounding and balancing
me once again
and my spirit shines
Pacific blue......."


~ "Pacific Blue" by SEA --what's not to like!


EA

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8 posted 2003-08-30 04:38 PM


Beautiful language and imagery.
Eric

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9 posted 2003-08-30 06:08 PM


nice
Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-08-30 06:28 PM



Now, besides me, do you know who would have loved seeing this beauty come from your pen?  Our own Wilfred.  In fact, I hear him chuckling now...and smiling in nod of head.

A and a library piece.  This is wonderful, dear.  Thank you!

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
11 posted 2003-08-30 06:33 PM


I'll share a glass of this with you...

Jason

Paul Wilson
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12 posted 2003-08-30 11:05 PM


SEA...Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

garysgirl
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13 posted 2003-08-30 11:20 PM


I let it all go
here,
I am free
here,
I touch heaven
and forget the things
that haunt
and know the truth
of happiness
and contentment


Sea, this is so beautiful, and exactly how I feel at the beach in my hometown. I live about an hours drive from there now, but I still love to go there. It's not the ocean waters, but the Gulf of Mexico. It's so peaceful there, expecially at night. Thank you for taking me there tonight through your poem.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-08-30 11:25 PM






(smiles) Oh Susan, this is beautiful, sweet friend, in two years I am going to move to Portland, Oregon so I can be right near the ocean I love, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is so comforting, sweet friend, the ocean to me is the best karma, what a place to wash your feet and pirouette in grace in those Chinook winds, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Martie
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15 posted 2003-08-30 11:30 PM


Sea...I feel much the same way next to the Pacific...Hope all is well!  
JamesMichael
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16 posted 2003-08-31 06:54 PM


Beautiful feelings...one of my favorites...James
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17 posted 2003-08-31 06:59 PM


very beautifully penned,,,

         


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