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NewAgePaladin
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0 posted 2003-08-30 01:32 PM


"Grewin Princess"
She stands waiting,
Her eyes glow bright.
She stands tainted,
Throught the night.
She stands waiting,
As midnight grows near.
To end up alone is all that she fears.
She stands waiting,
As dusk turns to day.
She stands waiting,
Forever she'll stay.

© Copyright 2003 Ben Hitz - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-30 01:36 PM


I like your user name, and I am enjoying your first post!  Welcome to Passions! Please, check your e-mail for a Special Greeting!
jade dragoness
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2 posted 2003-08-30 02:50 PM


WELCOME to the beautiful blue pages of poetry.

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2003-08-30 04:16 PM


*bumps this* Welcome!! enjoyed look forward to more

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2003-08-30 04:37 PM


Welcome to the family. Does 'Grewin' have a particular meaning? I see you like Midieval role playing so is Grewin a place? I look forward to reading more from you!
passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-30 04:38 PM


Welcome...hope you enjoy it here

nice entrance!

NewAgePaladin
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6 posted 2003-08-30 05:11 PM


Actually, "Grewin" is a type of Dark Elf. Much like the "Drow".  My Poem is about a young Grewin princess who wants nothing to do with the evils in which she has been born into. She intrusts the aid of a handsom  Ranger and one night sneaks to the gates of her city to wait for his Arrival. I actually have written a Story about it, but this isnt a story forum, its a poetry one. *winks*. I've written Quiet a few stories, and alot of my poems are ones that are based apon my writings.
Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-08-30 05:28 PM


Then you're a must for our Prose Section, Paladin, and we'd love to see some of your stories in there.  We are ALL avid readers...

I'll bet you liked your Greeting Card then, I hope, with the photo attached.

Welcome again.  Snuggle in...and enjoy yourself in this, your new poetry/prose home...

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2003-08-31 03:38 AM


Welcome to Passions, my friend, and this is a great first post...I am happy to see a storyteller here, and will look forward to delightful reading when i see your name!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Martie
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9 posted 2003-09-01 12:38 PM


Hi there...thanks for the explanation of Grewin...I thought while reading that she might be a statue.  Welcome to Passions...I look forward to more of your writing!
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