»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #28
»
Morning Struggles
| Open Poetry #28 |
|
Morning Struggles |
|
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
|
Morning Struggles There is punishment to my thoughts as I swallow them each morning for breakfast. No weight gain, but the burden is just the same. They bicker with one another their tones gentle, but the insanity of it is needed, until my denials are emptied and new thoughts can be planted seeding another day. I will don my shades, hoping for that summer rain, waiting to be soaked so that my mind has another place to wander and those thoughts of you are cooled by the dampness behind these walls. I apologize to no one for my attacks of heart. I break them down into word games, a jeopardy of trial, an error of conviction and struggle in the simplicity of my mornings wondering if I will always feel this hollow... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I apologize to no one for my attacks of heart. I break them down into word games, a jeopardy of trial, an error of conviction and struggle in the simplicity of my mornings wondering if I will always feel this hollow... Don't you ever apologize for writing from and to the heart Your work is a tender touch, and I feel you here. Happy Saturday morning Maur~ |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good morning Lori, too hot to dig any more this day...praying for rain and more upper body strength.  hugs M was it me that said I didn't need a man...geezz how stupid of me ~sighing~ |
||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. I agree with Lori.....you write so well of the inner part of you that might not ever be seen if not for the elegance of your poetry.... |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are very sweet Barry..and between you and Lori...my day is made. Thank you, both  M I am so glad you have stayed with us. Even if I am not responding much on any regular basis, I am always reading when I have a moment to relax. [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-30-2003 01:28 PM).] |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nothing to apologize for, when you write so openly from the depths of a very big heart. And I do understand this one, knowing that some thoughts and feelings are difficult to swallow. |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmm..I spend more time choking than swallowing..or maybe that is wallowing..and I am trying to break out of it. Thank you Kacy  M |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"There is punishment to my thoughts as I swallow them each morning for breakfast. No weight gain, but the burden is just the same." ....wow....this knows me..... you write so amazing, so honest.... |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so good to see you here...thanks for the readin' and such nice comments Susan and sometimes I am too honest...so I lose on all counts... ~smiling M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-31-2003 06:10 PM).] |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
