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Friday, August 22, 2003

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Kielo
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0 posted 08-29-2003 03:19 PM       View Profile for Kielo   Email Kielo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kielo

Friday, August 22, 2003


Today is
the yesterday
I will hate
forever.
Never have I been
more foolish,
more ignorantly malignant.
Oh, I was blind.
Blind to right,
and blind to sense,
and blind to what
we both wanted.
That is why my heart,
crushed,
devoid of faith,
moves my pen
incessantly.
I will continue
to write of you, because
I miss you,
and Iím sick of me.

But then, so are you.




I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness.

[This message has been edited by Kielo (08-30-2003 03:57 PM).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 08-29-2003 03:30 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

that last line reads like a kick in the chest...this aches down the page...
well expressed emotions--powerful purge poet Kielo

When was the last time you felt high
Oh you were the best I've ever felt
Its so wrong not to be with you
Its getting harder to stay away.

SH

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


2 posted 08-29-2003 03:33 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Ouch...powerful, indeed.  Hugs, you...

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 08-29-2003 03:36 PM       View Profile for KristieSue   Email KristieSue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KristieSue's Home Page   View IP for KristieSue

yeah...*sigh*

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

angelblueyes
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4 posted 08-29-2003 03:42 PM       View Profile for angelblueyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelblueyes

I feel the pain in this.Healing hugs to whomever this is
Crystal
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maybe... but there are a good many who are not sick of you, nor are the days over for you to find that someone who is not sick of you.. and for them to embrace the you that they love..


last lines are like a kick in the chest... but that is how it feels sometimes isn't it.

Kielo
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Janet Marie.... Thank you. I would say that I was aiming for that specific impact, but I can't, because I honestly don't remember writing this, or the other three poems I wrote that night. Strange, eh? However, that is high praise, and I'm honoured.

Vicky.... thanks. Mind if I snuggle for a little bit?

KristieSue.... Yeah. It isn't very much fun, is it? *sad smile* Thank you.

angelblueyes.... Thank you very much. The hugs are much appreciated.

Ron.... Yes, that is how it feels sometimes. Thank you, and thanks for the encouragement.

Kielo

I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness.

gemjop
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I know this feeling, and you write of it,with such raw pain, hope youre ok.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Kielo
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Gemma.... I'm sorry you know the feeling. Thanks for the hugs and the compliment.

Kielo

I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness.

mytuesdaywishes
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9 posted 09-29-2003 06:18 PM       View Profile for mytuesdaywishes   Email mytuesdaywishes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mytuesdaywishes

same passion and pain that hits me hard and drives me mad, thanks for the poetry

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

mytuesdaywishes
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10 posted 11-01-2003 12:55 PM       View Profile for mytuesdaywishes   Email mytuesdaywishes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mytuesdaywishes

ouch, we've all gotta write the pain

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

 
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