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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Have I washed upon your shore, My life just ship wrecked once more, With high tide receding? Will with ebbing on the sand stay Or on foaming tide washed away With my life receding? My body feels the cutting rough shells Every scrape the salty sting impales With my touch receding. The ocean’s pull is much too great And not long on your beach I wait With my world receding. Gloom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hold on! I'll be right there! *running fast as I can in deep hot sand* Aszard, this is a sad one, for sure [This message has been edited by passing shadows (08-29-2003 12:53 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Water=cleansing, rebirth.  Susan |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful writing as always, Profeesor.  Hugs  Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Look out, look out I'm on my way.You my friend could never recede anything.I won't let you so there  Crystal |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
I enjoyed this poem and the style that you used. Good job. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I find your poem It sad yet good, I can not keep from comment Your words move me teacher |
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