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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-08-29 10:37 AM



What made you ask me
if you could partake
of my bed last night
of my heart and soul

Why didn't you think
that I would find out
a wife and four children
a home and a family

Do I look stupid to you
Did you think I'd not care
or did you think I'd let go
that you'd win me somehow

Well you're wrong all above
I found out and I care
Sure my heart breaks
but at least I know now

and

I was stupid

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-08-29 10:40 AM


nope you were not stupid, you are in love and you cared, that is no crime...and shame on them for not taking mature responsible consideration for your heart....

Powerful write and the way many of us have felt at one time or another.

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-29 10:41 AM


This is the worst feeling to have, but you spoke of it with strong conviction.Stay strong and hold your head up high.
Crystal

KristieSue
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3 posted 2003-08-29 10:54 AM


Thanks...it's a battle.  Most of the time I'd like to think I'm strong, but with moments of weakness.

I'll keep my head up....

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Kahlil
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4 posted 2003-08-30 12:59 PM


No, not stupid...loving, caring, and trusting.  I keep saying it, we are so vulnerable when we are in love, but I know of no other way for it to be. You did everything "right" in your giving, and now just take care of yourself, and hold your lessons for the next time.  ~K~  great write, by the way...
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-31 12:22 PM


I think sometimes we do act on our impulses too quickly and find ourselves in situations where we have to admit we made a mistake...I can only speak for myself...James
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