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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-08-29 06:36 AM



Silence In The Sound Of Still

dust from a
mountain crumble settles
as far as the eye
can see a horizon
a barren desert
of vast nothingness
and what lies underneath
all the ruin
do memories leave echoes
in the fold of time
where things
have been left behind
tiny grains of ash
dressed as a covering
shield the seed of hope
buried deep within
what triggers landslides
bringing chaos of destruction
and what binds us
to the tree rings of life
while we await in silence

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-29 07:09 AM


"buried deep within
what triggers landslides
bringing chaos of destruction
and what binds us
to the tree rings of life
while we await in silence"


LOVE this, tremendously..


gemjop
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2 posted 2003-08-30 06:59 AM




you make me sit still, and listen.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-08-30 10:37 AM


Haunting and beautiful.
Eric

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4 posted 2003-08-30 10:59 AM


sometimes I need dust, ashes, and silence
timothysangel1973
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5 posted 2003-08-30 12:15 PM


well sometimes I stir up the dust...create the ashes, and then recall how, where, what and why in the silence!

Great write Lady

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