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youngmoeses
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0 posted 2003-08-29 04:18 AM



i didn't include the first few lines...it's more of a LIVE poem...

past mistakes ya made, are laid freshly on my brain
took the train to place called change, but came back the same/
in a frame of mind, that holds Divinccis
now love convinced me, so loneliness is out to lynch me/
pinch me, awake from dreams, but it seems we've just avoided it
you got a spell on me, and I'll never try destorying it/
well if it's love then it's love
but when push comes to shove
will be able to keep this together
i'm tryin to settle down
get some better surroundins
but fa real girl ya need to stop playin'
i need to see emotions rise
but ya frozen ya eyes
gives the impression that ya don't have no feelings
so do a little growin up
and come see me when
ya find a better way to carry out ya dealings/


it's been a long road comin' and somethin ain't quite right
darkness flipped my night light, the hardest when we fight like
cats and dogs, draggin on, ain't how it's s'posed to be
cus moeses reads a seperate passage from the book of hopefully/
an omen beams above this relationship, find patience it's a virtue that i don't know
keep tellin' me to go slow/
but oh no, i rocked the boat, dropped the oars, far from shore, don't wanna swim tonight
baby i'm a throw this on a wim tonight/
dwindle right below, time to show ya true colors
always been good lovers, but not much outside the covers/
but i can't break free, and ya hold breaks me
so like janet, ask what you done for me lately/
maybe it's love, m-m-m-aybe it's magic
got me spastic, in a drastic situation
sky blasts percipitation, and i'm waitin in anticipation patiently
doesn't pay to be COOL, nah doesn't pay to be, i'm on my way to be/
a nervous wreck, herb in deck i'm rollin till i pass out
you got a spell on me, and i never wanna back out/


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-08-29 04:42 AM


cool! I can hear the music in this!
Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2003-08-29 09:41 AM


I also can hear a song in this, wow great write, Rose
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3 posted 2003-08-29 10:27 AM


:-) nice job!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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