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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-29 03:20 AM




ringlet
my finger
slips right through

a tickled touch
embraces my
wrist..

this
is what i
have forgotten

this is what i
chose to blow away

a brief explanation..
i recall
the time
when

a
kiss

could make it go away..

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-29 03:22 AM


very excellently penned,,

         


vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-08-29 03:32 AM



"i recall
the time
when

a
kiss

could make it go away.."

Me too...

Beautifully said, Meghan.

Hugs to you...

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-29 04:12 AM


me too

I always relate to you Meg

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2003-08-29 12:00 PM


Ouch.
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-08-29 12:10 PM


A kiss...yes a long time ago, when I was still married a kiss did it...then over time and so many mistakes...the kiss didn't work anymore....bitterness was what was left....so sad.

Anyway....I enjoyed your words and thoughts as always.

Susan

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-08-29 12:11 PM


I came back because as I hit "submit" I thought...

"How does one so young get so much insight?"

Thought I would share that thought.

Susan

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-08-29 12:57 PM


a kiss... what's that?

you are so intense...I love to read you

M

Kielo
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8 posted 2003-08-29 02:21 PM


We're so alike, and yet so different that it's funny..... I'm amazed yet again.

Kielo

I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness.

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2003-08-29 05:17 PM


Kaoru - your thoughts are well written...

BC

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10 posted 2003-08-29 05:38 PM


Wonderful write Meg

The title lured me in, and then your wonderfully woven words kept there!

)))hugs(((
Tima

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11 posted 2003-08-30 07:08 AM




It won't work, but have one anyway.

this ached my bones lady. knowing this well.

how do you keep doing this? you never fail to amaze.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ericc
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12 posted 2003-08-30 10:36 AM


Beautiful!
Eric

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