......Serenity......(20 or less)......

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Open Poetry #28

......Serenity......(20 or less)......

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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0 posted 2003-08-29 03:03 AM

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
~  Floating into solitude I'm mesmerized  ~
~  by the enchanting thoughts drifting in ~
~  and out of the emptiness of my heart   ~
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[This message has been edited by QjQ (08-29-2003 03:06 AM).]

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

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where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-29 03:07 AM

Wow, very well done, sir!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-08-29 03:29 AM

And so am I...beautifully said, Q...
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2003-08-29 04:14 AM

very pretty, but sad in a way Glenn

KristieSue

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4 posted 2003-08-29 10:46 AM

nice job... :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

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Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-08-29 10:48 AM

Nice, but sad.I can say I've had these thoughts recently.Very well penned my friend.

Crystal

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-08-29 10:57 AM

QjQ
Well done, enjoyed.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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7 posted 2003-08-29 11:10 AM

smiles and husg, good jobber

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

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8 posted 2003-08-29 08:44 PM

So much of a story expressed
in your twenty or less's. You
do these very well ~~ and NOW,
you're exposing your artistic
talents! "Framed poetry"!!!
TERRIFIC! (Printing THIS one
for my treasure chest)!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

timothysangel1973