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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-29 12:38 PM



Original Print

developed like a
black and white photograph
tinted by all
that surrounds me
are deep indiscretions
of my mind
in the process of
the way I think
and it never lets
me rest
they invade me
day and night
I in turn
release this power
on paper
the place of
my security
flying on wings
of ink
to be unclothed
for all
the world
to see

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-29 12:43 PM


Helen . . .

God, this sings . . .
isnt it funny how silent we are
in life . . .
yet stand naked before 7000+?
*smile*
xxoo

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2003-08-29 12:46 PM


this says it all very good, writing in essence reveals the inner you.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-29 01:00 AM


i am glad you are here
Ratleader
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4 posted 2003-08-29 01:15 AM


Original, print....print, original.... love that dichotomy!

Don't ever let it let you rest. Goad it into goading you, because paper is only as secure as the last thing you wrote on it. Take that from one who for decades failed to write.

....but that unclothed part....You're not entirely so...we already know for certain that you have shoes!

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-08-29 01:18 AM


Pure..sigh
Larry C
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6 posted 2003-08-29 05:59 PM


And to think...I almost missed it!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2003-08-29 06:08 PM


OneSlickLady~
Indeed ... you are~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2003-08-29 09:22 PM


And what a wonderful job you do...
...hey, I'm with Sue...WE ARE ALL NAKED IN FRONT OF 7000 +, dang that is a scary thought!

Great write

Tima

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