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water haiku |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Be solid as stone. But move as the purest stream. Keep the flow steady. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy . . . exactly how does one accomplish this may I ask? *smile* nice senyru xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Yes...  "My friends are my estate." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Don't know.  I am still the proverbial beginner, even at my ripe age.(don't ask) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
THANKS Arizona!  I'm doing a rain dance for you guys tonight. After another glass of wine, maybe. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
you a Zen master Kacy this is beautiful |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
can I give you a big hug, brian?  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I absolutely love this. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 yes! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A friend directed me to this. Strong, steady, sure... Ed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
THANK YOU! Ed, Dixie, poetic Diamond. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
there's a lesson in here somewhere  nice~~ M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yep go with the flow, as you remain steadfast and true to your own heart keep your thoughts and actions as pure and unadulterated as you can |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh yes! I like this very much....so true  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ah yes, was it Lao Tzu that said to attack the hard strong stone there is nothing better than the soft weak water? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks, SEA not sure about that one Reb, but it sounds plausible [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (08-30-2003 10:54 PM).] |
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Jordyn05 Member
since 2003-07-17
Posts 62 |
Super poem. It moved my soul. Keep on writting more poems like this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Jordyn! This short form is one of my favorite styles. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh, I love the contrasts in this, sweet friend, all of the elements of Mother Nature have them and this is one fine example, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, I love your senryus!!  Hugs, lady Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ I like .. really like this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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