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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2003-08-28 03:24 PM


Waters rising, tides not subsiding,
Skies blazing, still all surreal,
Calmness subsides , excitement sets in,
The journey of adventure flies high above the skies,
Land and Sea such harmony,
Though different they are nsync,
Unique they dance together as if the perfect couple,
Adventure: they say is far above the clouds,
Yet adventure is where the heart dares to dream,
Dreaming of daring to breath and live life,
To get your feet wet if only slowly at first,
The excitement sets in, adrenaline flows,
That's just when you've begin,
Sounds of the sea just hear my plea,
Skies of the blue help me pursue,
Not just a dream, reality
That's where life begins.

© Copyright 2003 Rose - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2003-08-28 03:31 PM


ahhhh, yes indeedy, this was a keeper...lovely words and thoughts from a heart that truly knows about the best and biggest picture...keep em comin!  very much enjoyed
Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2003-08-28 03:35 PM


thx, I wrote this thinking of a friend of mine, glad you enjoyed it.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-29 04:45 AM


that is where life begins
Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2003-08-29 09:33 AM


thx passing shadows, I see you write just as I do with my heart. It really opens up more than just the heart but the soul as well. thx for reply
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