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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-08-28 02:49 PM



shadow within

just as if in a lost of thought
complete darkness only gives a glimpse
of standing alone without your light rays
beaming next to me
leaving my shadow within

ever glowing the paths
through clouds of darkness
imagining your brightness
that is surrounding me
leaving my shadow within

suddenly realizing
wings have emerged
shinning upon us all
our transparent angel
leaving my shadow within

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bernie

  


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-08-28 03:08 PM


beautifully written and felt...
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2 posted 2003-08-28 04:25 PM


Very, very nice Bernie. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-28 09:15 PM


you know I love any poem about shadows

good stuff B

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4 posted 2003-08-28 10:24 PM


Bernie, this is lovely
and I adore anything written about angels
*smile*
xxoo

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5 posted 2003-08-28 11:18 PM


Wonderful write Bernie


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6 posted 2003-09-04 12:46 PM


Lovely and the image of a trasparent angel will be bringing me wonderful dreams this night.  Enjoyed, and thank you for visiting my site to Bernie.
Kethry
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7 posted 2003-09-04 01:26 AM


Wonderful shades of light in this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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