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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-08-28 07:05 AM


What wind blows my sleep away,
What stirring
Of heat from lingering day,
Without lotus or lilacs
Sweet smelling,
But sweat the senses attacks
That moistens thin cotton sheets
And pooling
So in my own lake I sleep,
I go to the window’s weak wind
For cooling
And watch day’s twilight begin;
Sunlight burns the sleep away.

Gloom


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-08-28 08:12 AM


Professor,
You could always draw the curtains. LOL
Enjoyed

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-08-28 08:27 AM


a very good write...
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-08-28 08:28 AM


Aye, Professor...some days so little wind, and on others...more of a tease...but the fall is ready and on the eve of presentation, and soon your streets will be cool again...

and thank you for the lovely comment.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
4 posted 2003-08-28 11:39 AM


Gloomy,

I have had my own nights of "wind"..

Enjoyed..

Susan

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