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Filling In The Blanks |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Filling In The Blanks Could you fill in the blanks If I happen to write to you It would avoid my confusion Giving a much clearer view In the appropiate spaces After each questionmark Your replies could be made You could lighten the dark It is simply straightforward In being honest and frank If you have nothing to hide You could fill in every blank Writing with heart sincerity A mind often needs to ask Have you got the answers Or do you attempt to mask Hope©2003 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
men don't communicate well, you know that  good write lady, I hear ya! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks dixie for your honesty LOL I did feel better and got a few answers today ... thats if I am to believe them Hope |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Writing with heart sincerity A mind often needs to ask Have you got the answers Or do you attempt to mask Very good writing, Hope. Hey, I'm glad that you heard from him.  Hugs  Ethel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Ethel , yes my day was brightened when we chatted Hope |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Hope...You have said very much within these few lines. Writing with heart sincerity A mind often needs to ask Have you got the answers Or do you attempt to mask Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very powerful! I'm with Dix...men do not communicate well at all.... )))hugs((( Tima |
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