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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-08-28 02:32 AM



I long for days
before the whys
tainted mind
leaving a barren expanse
where dreams come to die

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-28 02:35 AM


RAFFFFIIEEEE

*jumps on you and smothers you with unwanted kissies and hugs and rainbows and puppies and kittens*


I loofah this

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-08-28 02:35 AM


Who says they're unwanted grins
MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2003-08-28 02:37 AM


Yeah -- before the "Because I said so"s...

-MVS

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Kaoru
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4 posted 2003-08-28 02:38 AM


*hits you with something glittery and pink*
Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-08-28 03:10 AM


Mark that's another post grins. But the whys are just questons in general..before i starting THinking so much and forgot to FEEL
how we wear down instincts and emotions wit thought

lol megs

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-08-28 03:29 AM


Raph:

first off the title is amazing . . .
irony in itself there
and I do know this feeling quite well
kind of reminds me when you only
had to come in when the streetlights
came on . . . you know?
that innocence . . .
Oh, to harness that would truly
be a miracle, but here you have
harnessed the feeling of it quite well
*smile*
xxoo

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-08-28 10:39 AM


this reminds me of something else you've written. i'm  not saying youre repeating yourself, though that is possible.

cant put me finger on it though.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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8 posted 2003-08-28 11:26 AM


enjoy your read
Martie
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9 posted 2003-08-28 11:33 AM


Aenimal

I think I was born with "whys" and I still find them pretty useful, but I think you're talking about a different kind.  I know those too.  Wish I could write so short and meaningful, like you.

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