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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2003-08-27 09:26 PM


sizzling throught the years,
an unashamed propagation
to maketh all shudder

the queazy half-truth,
this misbegotten song,
Willows Do Not Cry

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..circa 2003..Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..chanelled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros

© Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-27 09:36 PM



...they only sound
as if they do...

thank you for this, Spiros...

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2003-08-27 09:50 PM


..Sunshine../\..it pleases me that you read and comment on my poems; thanks..


../\..Spiros

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angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-08-27 11:23 PM


Thank you for sharing this.I enjoyed it.
Crystal

Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2003-08-28 01:05 AM


..angelblueyes../\..thank you../\..Spiros

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[This message has been edited by Spiros Zafiris (08-28-2003 01:06 AM).]

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-29 05:00 AM


awesome!
Spiros Zafiris
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6 posted 2003-08-29 05:34 AM


..passing shadows../\..thank you for your kindness..


../\..Spiros

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Kaoru
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7 posted 2003-08-29 07:42 AM


..willows do not cry.

what a line, great write.

LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-08-29 08:05 AM


smiles and hugs....giving words and light
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-08-29 08:07 AM


Spiros  
Good write, enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-08-29 11:23 AM


*s...nice

M

Spiros Zafiris
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11 posted 2003-08-29 08:32 PM


..Kaoru..LeeJ..Seymour Tabin..+ nakdthoughts

..thank you, all, for your kind words;
they're much appreciated..

../\..Spiros

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