Senior Moments (short verse-humor)

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Open Poetry #28

Senior Moments (short verse-humor)

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-27 06:08 PM

Senior Moments

As seniors we no longer have PMS.
Because being seniors we
have senior moments
and
forget we have PMS.

Love Bon-Bon

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

1 posted 2003-08-27 06:18 PM

Ha!
But I'm not so sure that's a victory.

[This message has been edited by wandering glider (08-27-2003 07:24 PM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-08-27 06:28 PM

Is that what I have to look forward too

Crystal

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-08-27 06:35 PM

Bonnie,
Cute, enjoyed the read.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-08-27 06:40 PM

PMS? is that a (Personal Male Servant) ?

enjoyed your write bon bon

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

5 posted 2003-08-27 06:46 PM

Hey Q
Personal Male Servant I want one of those. To cook and clean. Cool......
Now lets see what were we talking about?
Bon-Bon

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

6 posted 2003-08-27 07:23 PM

cute write, but i would change the line-breaks, so that the second-to-last and the last are the same line. it just doesnt' flow the way it could right now.

ah, the joys of aging.

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