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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-27 07:13 AM

For a moment

I gaze upon a rising sun

and remember if I stare too long,

I may go blind..

But I'd be happy knowing that

it was the last thing I saw.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-08-27 07:17 AM

and the sun will show you the way to love again
how bad could it be?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-08-27 08:59 AM

and you encourage through your insightful loving words....and so shall you be...believe my friend...believe

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2003-08-27 10:29 AM

Blindness is in the eyes of the beholder.

I am "held" by your thoughts!

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2003-08-27 11:28 AM

That would be a beautiful final vision though even that would be painful...

(20 or less...?)

-MVS

You CAN make a difference: http://educate-yourself.org/

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (08-27-2003 11:28 AM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-28 02:02 AM

26 or less grins...nice writing Meg

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-08-28 02:11 AM

I meant LINES people, LIIINNNEEEESSS!

...but I'll take all insult and critic..it's fine..

*cries*

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-08-28 03:36 AM

ahhh this is perfect . . .
and what a last sight to see
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2003-08-28 11:56 AM

I love reading everything you do (20 words/lines). Your thought process is always a treat and I for one am very glad you found this place..

Susan

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2003-08-28 01:16 PM

Worth the retinal damage to read this.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-08-28 04:49 PM

terrific,,,

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-08-28 05:36 PM

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

12 posted 2003-08-28 07:14 PM

Beautiful words for a beautiful vision.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

13 posted 2003-08-30 06:50 AM

I'd say cool, but i hate that word.

just, library.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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