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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is no becoming. There is only this verge before the sudden emptiness of what may be. This is where we stand. We are the subtle edge between two worlds. We are the essence of all things that vanish in a flash of fierce desire. We are the secret that lingers in the silent wonder of the dawn. We are a myth...left shattered in the wake of realitys glance. And we are the space that gives form to broken pieces left unfound. There is no becoming. There is only this nameless verge that stands before us... Waiting. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I enjoy the feel, style, and thought of your writing and topics. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Eric, like a void to be filled as always . . . beautiful writing xxoo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
If there is no becoming, is there also no being? Still I like the thoughts in this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Hi Kethry, Thanks for your reply! There is only Being. This thought alone can take us past the notion of duality. We can only become what we are not. And what are we not? We are the mind-stuff of God. The micro within the macro. The wave to the ocean. We simply are...everything. Love, Eric |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Wow... such powerful beauty, profound spiritual truth. I love the flow of this, too... a deep ripple caressing my thoughts and awakening my mind. Thank you for your brilliant light... I see more now than I did before. I love you, Moca |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And we are the space that gives form to broken pieces left unfound. There is no becoming. There is only this nameless verge that stands before us... Waiting I know this, Eric. And for the impatient, such as myself, the waiting is torture of the worst kind. A great write, Patricia |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always enjoy your talented visions... Wonderful. TD |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I believe there is a becoming, but what also must be understood is that the becoming is not just some sunrise you see or some message you anticipate a teacher to write on the blackboard or a green light you wait for, it probably goes on every second and one can never register it! (sigh) That's where I see the myth coming in, this is excellent, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And we are the space that gives form to broken pieces left unfound. ....all of it, but especially this. Well conceived, and well said. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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