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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2003-08-26 11:34 AM


I'm living on the edge,
I'm dying on the edge,
Somehow I feel more obliged on the edge,
Strange and ironic, but it seems to be my tonic,
Living life, though sometimes in strife,
So sometimes feel a little contrite,
That's me living on the edge,
Sometimes the sky is blue,
Sometimes I just feel more blue,
Tears come,
Laughter fades, then I wonder what has changed,
Nothing I suppose I'm just living on the edge,
Does it make me confused, maybe but mostly amused,
I guess it's good when you can laugh at yourself,
So that's just a thought, of something I am,
And something I'm not.


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-08-26 12:13 PM


Rosebud1229
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2003-08-26 12:34 PM


thank you seymour, often I write with emotion, don't know if that's a good thing but it does help the inner self.
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