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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-08-26 10:10 AM


To form a snowball
with, your majestic thoughts so,
add a bit of
green and blue
then you knew
why?
these colors
are they you?
and the plan on your
covered in grace.
has it simmered too long?
or are the stars still
talking
life’s mocking
the line is drawn.
and
we carry
this destine colored awe
offered
not withstanding
terminal.
this life
Forever, tomorrow’s song


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-26-2003 10:11 AM).]

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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-08-26 12:29 PM


Great write Poe...Very much enjoyed!

Tima

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2 posted 2003-08-26 12:31 PM


"add a bit of
green and blue
then you knew
why?
these colors
are they you?"

This is pretty damn cool

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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3 posted 2003-08-26 05:29 PM


poe, awesome write . .  always another day to forge ahead

or are the stars still
talking
life’s mocking
the line is drawn.

hurry . . .
xxoo

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2003-08-28 09:55 AM


Tima, kaoru and littlewing, Thanks to all of you for taking the time to be so nice. Appreciate you stopping by. Glad you enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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