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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-08-26 07:57 AM



Amazing tone of Viola, rich and noble
You have given me ambition, miracles probable & poetic
Imposing from the soul…undulations of the conscience
How fortunate my world from the branch of your love
Even when it withers, it grows and gives a new voice
To my essence…training me to sing

You store my core in embryonic thought
Until I’m faint…where inner truths become plump
Bubbling off my forehead…sharpening images
Growing within…within a sunlight I can taste & feel
Lingering in every depth of my being, I’m captivated simultaneously

You hold that mountain of color, of hope
Stirring unreachable dreams, coupling with all things
Constant smell of your skin a golden touch of fire
Permeates my whole being, looks upon your erotic smile

I ask for nothing, except to know you
To touch you…to perceive your essence
The one person in this world who thinks as I
To endeavor to make this insane world dance

I wonder where you are, if your thinking of me
I wonder who you are and if God will bless us to meet

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-08-26 08:25 AM


LeeJ,
You are an elegant writer and make a lovely bouquet. Enjoyed

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-08-26 11:26 AM


LeeJ~

'where inner truths become plump'

Such a rich line of thought~
Enjoyed the entire piece, but this stood out in my mind~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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3 posted 2003-08-27 07:29 AM


It all stood out for me, gah, how do you do this??

Amazing.

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-08-28 10:36 AM


Lee - what a fine writer you are
I do not know hwo you do this
but please keep doing

I ask for nothing, except to know you
To touch you…to perceive your essence
The one person in this world who thinks as I
To endeavor to make this insane world dance

beautiful
and when you least expect it
xxoo

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-08-28 01:59 PM


I ask for nothing, except to know you
To touch you…to perceive your essence
The one person in this world who thinks as I
To endeavor to make this insane world dance


Oh yes, Lee...I have found this.
It sounds like you have a lot of love inside
your heart to give. I hope that you meet this man soon.  
Hugs  
Ethel



ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2003-08-28 02:02 PM


Oh LeeJ,
What great lines you have written here.
Wonderful. TD

Martie
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7 posted 2003-08-28 02:04 PM


LeeJ

If your heart already knows, then it will be so.  This was beautiful!

vlraynes
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8 posted 2003-08-28 03:16 PM



Lee...this is so very beautiful.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

QjQ
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9 posted 2003-08-28 04:46 PM


oh my sometimes lee i wonder wher you get all your insperations,  what a wonderful write of feelings,,

         


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