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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada 
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Full moon ovulation phoneline steam and flame slivers of sky slice through the window shoot down the wire searching for home Does he know I'm a starfish spread across a late Pisces moon alien intoxicated challenging the perfect earth broad shouldered Does he read between the silences I hang like mist heart spilled dripping I cloak the mountain furnishing the abyss |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
He does, that and more....because you will have told him in many ways. Us you tell in excellent poetry...him you tell....the way you tell. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great writing nice addition to PIP |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
siren like . . . |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I have to admit that I am addicted to images in poetry, and you have painted many here for the delight of my mind's eye!!! Wonderful, and I really like your style...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
thankx everyone for your lovely comments  |
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