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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 08-26-2003 01:43 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise


Full moon ovulation
phoneline steam and flame
slivers of sky
slice through the window
shoot down the wire
searching for home

Does he know I'm a starfish
spread across a late Pisces moon
alien intoxicated
challenging the perfect earth
broad shouldered

Does he read between the silences
I hang like mist
heart spilled dripping
I cloak the mountain
furnishing the abyss
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


1 posted 08-26-2003 01:49 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

He does, that and more....because you will have told him in many ways.

Us you tell in excellent poetry...him you tell....the way you tell.

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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


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great writing nice addition to PIP
wandering glider
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siren like . . .
Sunnyone
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I have to admit that I am addicted to images in poetry, and you have painted many here for the delight of my mind's eye!!!  Wonderful, and I really like your style...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Tequilia_Sunrise
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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