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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-26 01:03 AM


This window
is hollow..

Flow down
my cheek, oh
severed
and sleek you
run..

Many times we regret
meeting the words halfway.

This path was shaded with
faulty moonlight

..I'd hardly noticed the ground
below my feet.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-08-26 01:07 AM


very cool
MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-08-26 01:09 AM


...but you did notice...

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Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-08-26 02:00 AM


nice meggie
wandering glider
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aloft
4 posted 2003-08-26 02:59 AM


"Many times we regret
meeting the words halfway."


All too often . . .

nice line

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2003-08-26 04:57 AM



"Many times we regret
meeting the words halfway.

This path was shaded with
faulty moonlight

..I'd hardly noticed the ground
below my feet."


Oh yes...very cool lines, Meghan.  Well said.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-08-26 12:00 PM


Like the pedestal seeing itself.
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