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Midnight Fantasies

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


0 posted 08-25-2003 09:15 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise



Midnight fantasies of me and you
Making love the whole night through
Giving my love that is true
Then getting up and feeling blue
'Cause I know I don't have you

Midnight fantasies of making love all night
Taking our spirits to a new height
Holding you close, and squeezing you tight
How you fill me with delight

Midnight fantasies of you and me
Reaching new heights of ecstasy
Dreaming of bliss that may never be
So give it to me, boy, in my fantasy

Midnight fantasies that make me weak
Pleasure so sweet it makes me overheat
Passion so strong it makes me reach my peak
I get so excited I just can't speak

Midnight fantasies of you
Tell me quick, what can I do
To make all my fantasies come true

© Copyright 2003 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
eminor_angel
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since 05-22-2003
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1 posted 08-25-2003 09:22 PM       View Profile for eminor_angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eminor_angel

i hate to say this, but the rhyme scheme gets a bit repetive and predictable . . . I usually think that schemes such as abab work better than aaaa.

Good job though. I hope you get your wishes!
Tequilia_Sunrise
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2 posted 08-25-2003 09:25 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

I understand what you mean but sometimes your heart is so full of love you can only decribe it one way i try to mix it up and havent done the rhyme thing in awile, but to each it's own!

thanks
Tequilia
JamesMichael
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3 posted 08-26-2003 09:00 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...I would say believe...and hold out for what you want...patience...be mysterious...James
Tequilia_Sunrise
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4 posted 07-05-2004 02:39 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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