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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-08-25 08:20 PM



Listen Up, Grandma
~*Grandma Poet*~

Grandma ... look deep into my eyes
I want you to tell me another poem
about how you love me sooooo much
that you waited a lifetime for me~

I want to hear you say it over and over
so I'll never, ever forget
When I grow up I want to be a poet
... just like you~

You got that straight, Grandma ?


(And I want your earrings too)



~Oh yes, little darling ... very straight indeed~
~My precious little Delaney Makay Tindal~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2003-08-25 08:26 PM


so sweet
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2 posted 2003-08-25 08:29 PM


Isn't she just beautiful.....just like her Grandma...

Gives me the baby blues, and I have three already...what am I thinking????  hehe

What a wonderful gift you have there!

SmartChick
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3 posted 2003-08-25 09:07 PM


Marge, she is a little doll.
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4 posted 2003-08-25 09:19 PM


You two are pretty as a picture. I'm printing this picture out and keeping it on my fridge. Precious and special you two are. I want to give you both a great big hug!

Luvs, Marti

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5 posted 2003-08-25 09:24 PM


Marge sweet sis....you stole my heart with this one, or was it that precious child?  In any case..love you both!
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6 posted 2003-08-25 11:31 PM


What an incredibly special picture that is!
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7 posted 2003-08-26 03:16 AM



"Grandma ... look deep into my eyes
I want you to tell me another poem"

Marge...this is absolutely priceless...
both the photo and the poem.
It tugs at my heart.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2003-08-26 03:46 AM


Dear Marge:  What a lovely gift this picture and poem are.  I am keeping a copy of it, of course!  You are both beautiful!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2003-08-26 05:06 AM


oh Marge

I'm in love

Nan
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10 posted 2003-08-26 07:49 AM


She just gets cuter and cuter every day, doesn't she???...
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11 posted 2003-08-26 08:54 AM


Thanks for another picture and poem, Marge. This is so sweet...

We could use another poet like you! Tell her to join the blue pages when she's ready

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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12 posted 2003-08-26 10:58 AM


And what Delaney wants..... *G*

This is a delight, Marge... that picture is priceless! *S*

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13 posted 2003-08-26 11:51 AM


She's a cutie! If she's got some of grandma in her, she'll be writing by the time she is 3 years old!

Deb

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14 posted 2003-08-26 12:18 PM


Marge  
I am happy for you both.

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15 posted 2003-08-26 07:06 PM


Del-aney-ightful
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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16 posted 2003-08-27 07:39 PM


What a lil angel, indeed!
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17 posted 2003-08-27 07:49 PM


Aww...I could look at that picture all day. She has such a loving look on her face. You can tell how much she loves you Marge!! This is so precious!!!
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18 posted 2003-08-27 08:11 PM


Auntie Margie girl this is beautiful the presentation is perfect but the words are simply stunning. I wish I was there too she is so lovely indeed.
Another beautiful poem you are so talented
Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy


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at every pore with instant fires
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19 posted 2003-08-27 08:29 PM


I had to come here to tell you, that this was the most gorgeous thing i've seen!

how cute are you BOTH?

always keeping me smiling marge!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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20 posted 2003-08-27 08:33 PM


Pretty baby. Give a kiss and hug from
Auntie BJ.
Beautiful picture and poem.
Bon-Bon

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21 posted 2003-08-27 10:09 PM


Marge...Do you know how to say "SPOILED ROTTEN" Thats what being a grandmother is all about RIGHT!!!!
Beautiful picture and poem...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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22 posted 2003-08-27 10:39 PM


Beautiful picture and equisite smiles from you both.If she's anything like her grandma she'll be a heavenly angel
Crystal

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23 posted 2003-08-27 10:46 PM


Marge, she looks like she's as proud of you
and loves you as much as you love her. This
poem and picture are so precious!!
Hugs to you both  
Ethel

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24 posted 2003-08-28 12:58 PM


Bravo
very cute
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2003-08-28 10:15 AM



I thank you all for enjoying this little darling 'almost' as much as I do~

SHE IS MY HEART~
Each photo a poem-in-the-making~
Each loving moment ... a treasure~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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26 posted 2003-08-29 12:02 PM


just makes me want one

however, my daughter is 15...I'll wait for ten more years LOL

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27 posted 2003-08-29 01:17 AM


Oh Marge, this is gorgeous, and what a beautiful picture.  You are so very lucky to have the chance to share in your grandchildren's lives...very lucky...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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28 posted 2003-08-29 10:50 AM


ugh!  how sweet!!!!! :-)  She's adorable...and I'm sure she'd be happy sitting with you forever while you told her EVERYTHING....

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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29 posted 2003-08-29 11:17 AM


I don't remember if I responded to this one..but I would do it again just to see her face and yours, Marge

hugs
M

Marge Tindal
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30 posted 2003-08-29 03:32 PM


Coming back to thank you ALL~

And Maureen ... I sure want you in her keepsake books ... so thanking you big time special dearest lady~
Keeping you in prayer vigil friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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