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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-08-25 04:21 PM



Dancing To Sunday

on an ordinary afternoon
you set me to music
warmth softly touched skin
tuned to play slowly
touch composed of breath
drawing in taking mine
that I reach for to know
in this tune to be part of
sounds sweetest concert
rocking to your warm lullaby
as you play me

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-25 04:28 PM


"rocking to your warm lullaby
as you play me"

Intense words sweet poetess, wonderful writing!

Tima

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2 posted 2003-08-25 04:31 PM


That sounds incredibly inviting!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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3 posted 2003-08-25 07:22 PM


enjoyed
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4 posted 2003-08-25 07:27 PM


A memorable motif...

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5 posted 2003-08-25 08:56 PM




i love it.

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6 posted 2003-08-25 09:54 PM


as usual helen beautiful writing
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7 posted 2003-08-25 11:40 PM


Music...pure music, and delightful to hear. Thank you for it.

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