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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-08-25 03:46 PM



When I awoke this morning
Their were teardrops on my bed.
My eyes were sore and swollen,
And this is what I said…

“How long, until you come and see me?
And how long, until I can hold your hand?
How long, until I feel your arms around me?
I am aching, and I want to die… How long?"

My heart's been beating slower
Since the day I left your view,
Because you’re the one I trusted.
I found happiness with you.

I know this is like dying…
I’m not fighting to remain.
Blood’s draining from my heart
And love out of my veins.

While I face the death before me,
I am crying out to you…
“How long, until you come and see me?
And how long, until I can hold your hand?
How long, until I feel your arms around me?
I am aching, and I want to die… How long?"

I’ve lost my laugh and smile,
The world has turned to grey.
I need to know you want me,
I crave to hear you say…

“How long, until you come and see me?
And how long, until I can hold your hand?
How long, until I feel your arms around me?
I am aching, and I want to die… How long?”

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-08-25 05:47 PM



oh my! Sending you a rainbow

GG
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Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-08-25 06:29 PM


Midnitesun,
Thank you. I know its not a very great writing... but the tears were real, and so are the words.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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