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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2003-08-25 01:08 PM


four 11 Monday morning


what the hell do you
think can you fix it don't have
the address or a frame of reference
can't seem to get it what's up what's
wrong what's a matter with you guys
these days..? there's not much to

relate to on what..! a
switchboard..!
unless
their
what!
In what
base..? your
database oh BTW way

that little act of ya all's apologizin' ain’t
empressin' me none, listen the kid is coming
home & ya all's machine melancholy etiquette
ain't helpin' what do you think my memree's
goin' numb I’m down the road a piece
whatever happened ta all those

numbers ya all's
had awhile
ago
&
I
only
want one
for pete's sake
isn't this the number
for information I know
the numbers changed
that's why I'm callin'
listen can I talk to
someone that
knows
somethin'





Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


[This message has been edited by lucky (08-25-2003 01:36 PM).]

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lucky
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1 posted 2003-08-25 01:29 PM



sory about that, changed the last line, thought it might be taken as a slam...

dale


angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-08-25 01:31 PM


lucky:This is good and I know Toe would like it
Crystal

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 2003-08-25 03:02 PM


I thank you for keeping him in your thoughts. *S* But as for information? I keep sending the man MY number... what more does he need? *G*
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-08-25 03:03 PM


*sigh* I think we are all thinking about our friend Toe, hoping all will be OK.
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