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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-08-25 11:49 AM


your day starts
the Sun king climbs
coffee for the cup
songs for the crime

another day sighs
a search they sought
oncoming fragrance
the same was brought

sounds and bleeding
the moans no healing
catching the lie
their stories cry

the rut, the blame
with blinders their name
the same --
call it a shame

follow the ring
so far, so told
those pockets, filled
of gold called cold

lift up your want
laced with escape
look for another
day for the chase

time is the giver
our comfort and foe
don’t look behind
the glory you hold.


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-25-2003 05:31 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-08-25 12:00 PM


mysticpoe
Interesting write, enjoyed.

waxing poetic
New Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 3
Virginia
2 posted 2003-08-25 12:01 PM


Enjoyed the flow here ... as the sun and moon give chase to pass the days, the clock ticks forever on.

WP

For what is a poet without words?  Merely another human who hopes, dreams and fears in silence.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-08-25 12:02 PM


I enjoyed the flow and imagery you portrayed here.
Crystal

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-08-25 01:09 PM


poe, yes, another day, the sun still shines,
but the pain remains . . .
day after day after day . . .
xxoo

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

5 posted 2003-08-25 08:58 PM


Seymour, WP, Crystal and littlewing, thanks for stopping by and commenting. Really appreciate all of you reading. I can't believe how fast this forum moves! Thanks again.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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