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Janette
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addictions

he is a mid-afternoon
Starbuck's latte coffee man
where as she is an all day
Peach Tea Snapple kind of gal

two distinctly different
tastes but each serves it's purpose
stimulating their own needs
for a little caffeine kick

however she longs for change
the opportunity to
sit outside in the sunshine
drinking their brews together

although he states that is fine
his idea to address
mid-afternoon sluggishness
refreshes more than palate

she smiles at his suggestion
knowing what he has in mind
the ultimate solution
nourishing all addictions

his for hers ... hers for his

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

© Copyright 2003 Janette - All Rights Reserved
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Janette
Well done, enjoyed the write.
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Janette, this sounds like an invitation to me??
I hope all turns out well. She is a very good
writer of her thoughts..... I hope he is, too?  
Hugs  
Ethel
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Janette, You've done it again lady You hold the passion and the intrigue that I always find within your writes.
Crystal
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A very cool write...aah what to do when vices become vices.

Jason
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And all I seem to get served is a cold turkey sandwich.
Dang.
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very good write,,,

     

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"she smiles at his suggestion
knowing what he has in mind
the ultimate solution
nourishing all addictions"

Hmmm, now that has me thinking Janette!

Great write poetess!

Tima

[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (08-25-2003 04:46 PM).]

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Nice touch
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Seymour Tabin - Thanks for the encouragement.

garysgirl - as a matter of fact ... yes he is!

Angelblueyes - Crystal you are sooo good to me, thanks girl friend, your comments always bring me much joy.

Jason Lyle - Producing more vices?  Well ... I must confess that I do enjoy the habitual affect it has on me.  Thanks for the smile.

S. Arthur Grey - Dear sir, why not add some caffeine or "something" into your afternoons ... it might help. Thanks for the giggles.

QjQ - I appreciate you taking the time to leave me a comment.

timothysangel1973 - I hope they are "fun" thoughts ... *wink* ... thanks.

Thomas19gold - Okay okay, so I had to keep it "G" rated.

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enjoyed
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vandana - thanks for leaving me the smilie face and response.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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Allright you got me on this one...what is the ultimate solution...James
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(smiles) Maybe it's time for both of you to try Tazo Citrus at Starbucks, it has both the sophistication of a coffee lover plus the juice-lovers sunbeam! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, differences in taste is what makes lovers love each other even more, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Janette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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   When like appetites share the need as well as fulfillment... vices become virtues. Much enjoyed, Janette.

            MoonShadow
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MoonShadow,

Thank you!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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