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Brigid WillowKeeper
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since 2003-08-24
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OHIO IN USA

0 posted 2003-08-25 08:51 AM



Follow me
And you will see
I am watching over you.

Follow me
And you will see
A heart that is true.

You tread a lonley path
And you always look back

For now things will be easy
when you choose to follow me.

Through all the lies you will see
The truth, it's true, is found in you.

Follow me
Because I see
A heart that is pure.

Follow me,
And it will be,
a simple but big journey.

Turn your back on this path
And never look back.

I'll take you back to your life
And show how to see your wife.

She loves you, you know it's true,
But you need to love her too.

Come and see,
The life that was
you threw it all away.

But there will be
one last chance.
To correct your broken ways.

I know you have it in you.
For I see you accepted the truth.

Return to your home
And you will find your love

Return to your home
And you will find your love

This is a song I just now wrote, It really is to the tune of May it Be, I couldn't get that song out of my head whilst writing this.

© Copyright 2003 Brigid WillowKeeper - All Rights Reserved
Opeth
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543
The Ravines
1 posted 2003-08-25 09:24 AM


Very interesting write.

Your heart is embedded in your thoughts and words.

So...has he returned?

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-08-25 09:26 AM


Brigid - the music to this I'm sure is as lovely as the words...

BC

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-08-25 09:35 AM


Your enchanting name speaks volumes... Welcome to Passions!

Since that tune kept playing in your mind, these "lyrics" begged to be written!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-08-25 10:03 AM


This is so sweet. Having faith, and believing in someone is enough to restore them. Such a loving, and kind write. I loved this!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-08-25 12:44 PM


Brigid . . . this is absolutely beautiful
and quite ironic,  I needed to read this today, it echoes my very thoughts . . .
A beautiful song indeed . . .
thankyou
xxoo

Brigid WillowKeeper
Member
since 2003-08-24
Posts 88
OHIO IN USA
6 posted 2003-08-25 02:53 PM


It was about a friend of mine, I am not going into details about the certain incident, though. Though, I just written it, this happened in the past. I learned when a friend is in trouble, and you don't know what to do for them, point them down the right way and send them off with a load of beliving in them and you can only let them find the rest themselves, (accually I learned that  lesson from the wizard of oz! lol)
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