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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-08-24 11:39 PM


Ambling, the warm winds fan desire
Slip knot, hair fine spun in tendrils wire
Sign or symbol, taking each upon it’s own
Through these hallowed halls a vision blown

Cascade in the trembles gently shoulders silk
Light or flight against the skin of sweet rose milk
Wings in flutter ski these creamy slopes unknown
Secret places in the high hopes as to soon be shown

Hidden partly, shy from view a little thrill
Pretty colors veiled, enchantment settled still
Painted in forget me not, seductively in place
Wilderness discovered flutter by a fingers trace

Rambling, the warm of blue night sky before me
Brushed against imagination sipping ever warmly
Calling in a fingertip, the wishes that may wander
Painting on of butterflies, in visionary ponder

Copyright Kkh 8/24/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-08-24 11:43 PM


This is so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-08-24 11:47 PM


Hidden partly, shy from view a little thrill
Pretty colors veiled, enchantment settled still
Painted in forget me not, seductively in place
Wilderness discovered flutter by a fingers trace

If you only knew how you light up my smile as I read down the page.....  
Your writing makes me melt into a puddle.  

Hugs for you TD~


Patricia
Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
3 posted 2003-08-25 12:03 PM


TD, your images, your images!!!!  Need I say more?

OK,  one more word...

Spectacular!

Patricia

[This message has been edited by Patricia (08-25-2003 12:06 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-08-25 12:28 PM


just fabulous!!!!

     


Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2003-08-25 08:59 AM


ThisDiamond - the imagery is excellent, and so are the words...

BC

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