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Fade me, smile tomorrow and I will do the same
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Fade me, smile tomorrow and I will do the same |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Promise me you'll smile tomorrow I hear you kept your head down smile for someone tomorrow If it's me my memory that curls your brow to them fade me away Fade me further tomorrow bury the hair upon your mind stroke it further long from you grow me faster from your skin nurture this forget you long to know I fade you knowing you are already sitting in the dark knowing you've changed butterfly you have cocooned Promise me not to come back flutter my world again trace lines to chances and see they have wrapped around you for every one I gave you . . . . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
You know, that's exactly what I started thinking approximately three hours and twenty eight minutes ago.  I love this poem, as I like everything you write. *grin*Kielo I'll never forget you, even though I'm moving on.... |
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Jaime
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MemberPosts 250 |
And you liked my poetry? Heh.. what's wrong with you?  Big sigh. You have distracted me for the time it took for me to read this poem (I read it twice because I love it) and for that I thank you. Sometimes the grips evolve and I try to free myself but my hands just slip. jaime. the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
fade away..incidentely a great little oasis song..did i ever mention i like them? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write. They say a smile a day keeps the doctor away. LOL Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Promise me not to come back flutter my world again trace lines to chances and see they have wrapped around you for every one I gave you That verse says it all~ and I hear you gemma, gemma~ I worry when I read things like this. I hope you are well sweet poetess~ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Chances...the coin of relationships.Love is always giveing, and hoping, for one more. great write. Jason |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
It's hard to ask them to go.. forever.. You want that freedom.. yet you loved.. YOU LOVED.. did they?.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem, this bitteresweet stanza shows your growth . . . Fade me further tomorrow bury the hair upon your mind stroke it further long from you grow me faster from your skin nurture this forget you long to know fade me from you . . . aghhh I know xxoo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I fade you knowing you are already sitting in the dark knowing you've changed butterfly you have cocooned Promise me not to come back flutter my world again trace lines to chances and see they have wrapped around you for every one I gave you ======================= Man I love this poem...what a cool, creative play on words and theme...and the title is groovy ooovy  LOLHEY gem-girlie... I have missed reading your gorgeous poetry.. my time in here is limited these days, and I know Im missing lots of poetry...I been looking on back pages and in Sanctuary to see what I missed of yours...has made for some lovely reads--- your muse is as generously inspired as it is gifted.  You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name ... |
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