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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


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Lost into continual dreams I trace,
Seated upon bedding within my place.
Nearby window, set partly open, fetch
Scented breeze of honeysuckle to sketch;
Abstract images from garden foliage grow,
Planted where? I could not know.
Numb acute senses quicken sharply thought,
Followed sudden anxiety by deep onslaught.
Yearn with focus, acquired sounds declare,
Birds' song and vocal children's laughter;
Outside my place, I know somewhere!
Moments phase onward, while I become
Aware to warmth that nurturing strum,
Intensive with directness. Now its' seize
Feels colder alongside wispy inward breeze
When heavy shadows grace my face.
Unsettled to memories, I now embrace!
Fallen silence, often tears I reply:
Birds' song quiet, children's laughter pass,
With fear I sense forgotten loneliness



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BluesSerenade
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since 10-23-2001
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By the Seaside


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Yearn with focus, acquired sounds declare,
Birds' song and vocal children's laughter;
Outside my place, I know somewhere!

Liked that,  like this~
Midnitesun
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2 posted 08-24-2003 10:53 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

quote:
Nearby window, set partly open, fetch
Scented breeze of honeysuckle to sketch;
Abstract images from garden foliage grow,
Planted where? I could not know.


I enjoyed this scented imagery. Nice to meet you, Tequilia_Sunrise.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


3 posted 08-24-2003 11:01 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Nice writing and always nice to see a fellow canuck
Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


4 posted 08-25-2003 12:04 PM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

Midnitesun, very nice to meet you too

And yes Aenimal it is very nice to see a fellow canadian! where abouts are you from?
Tequilia_Sunrise
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
 
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